A student writes:
"Online courses offer greater scheduling flexibility. This flexibility can benefit students who work. They also require considerable autonomy. This can become difficult when learners have limited experience managing their own study routines."
Although the paragraph is understandable, the teacher wants to improve its referential precision and thematic progression.
Which revision achieves this purpose most effectively?
"Online courses offer greater scheduling flexibility. This flexibility can benefit students who work. They also require considerable autonomy. This can become difficult when learners have limited experience managing their own study routines."
Although the paragraph is understandable, the teacher wants to improve its referential precision and thematic progression.
Which revision achieves this purpose most effectively?